Getting Emotional by Matt Peters

5writers is delighted to welcome today’s guest blogger, Matt Peters.

Matt Peters, Beating Windward Press

Matt Peters has an MFA in Creative Writing from the University of New Orleans and a BA in English from the University of Central Florida. He is the publisher and managing editor of Beating Windward Press, a small press for emerging authors. www.BeatingWindward.com

His non-fiction has been published in IMPACT!Axis Magazine; Writing Choices: Shaping Contexts for Critical Readers edited by Dr. Kathleen Bell; and Voices Rising: Stories from the Katrina Narrative Project edited by Rebeca Antoine.

His fiction has been published in There Will Be Words #9 by Burrow Press, 580 Split, the Burlesque Press Variety Show, Burrow Press Review, the anthologies  Bits of the Dead and Skeletal Remains edited by Keith Gouviea;  and the anthology Keeping Track from Main Street Rag. He can be reached at: MattP (at) BeatingWindward (dot) com

 

Getting Emotional by Matt Peters

During my first year in the University of New Orleans MFA program, my stories had been well received, but I hadn’t really gotten the workshop excited about my work. No one looked forward to getting a story from me. My fellow MFAers said my stories were mechanically very sound, structurally perfect, but that they didn’t get what was important about them or why any of the interesting scenes mattered.  I kept hearing, “What’s the point?”

At the time, I was trying to show everything and tell nothing like I’d been instructed in undergrad and countless “How to Write” books, but I’d gone to the extreme.  I objectively presented events and dramatized scenes, but left it up to the reader to add up all the events. The problem was no one knew what all the cold action and dialogue and description added up to. When pressed about what it all meant or what the point was, my defense was always, “Well, how would you feel in that situation?”

In my end of the year conference, Jim Knudsen, the Program Director at the time, gave me a great piece of writing advice. He told me to, “Get emotional.”

He said I knew about story mechanics and structure, but was way too intellectual when I wrote. I was over-thinking my stories. I thanked him for the advice, but really didn’t understand how thinking about the mechanics of my stories could be a bad thing until I noticed someone else getting the same “What’s the point?” comments on their stories.

We were critiquing a story about a woman who decides to change her life after watching her roommate go crazy. The story covered several months, so I knew that mechanically, each scene had to have significance and the important moments of the scenes should have built up and justified the decision to change her life at the end. (A fine balancing act to be sure because the ending should feel inevitable and true, but not totally predictable.) But all the scenes in this story felt independent and random to us readers. They didn’t seem to link together or even lead into one another, so the ending also seemed random, the character’s change coming out of nowhere.

In talking with the writer after workshop, she was able to tell me the point of every scene and exactly how all the scenes and events were supposed to build up to the character’s change. However the writer just hadn’t been able to reveal her character’s inner thoughts and emotions to us readers enough for us to see the point of each scene. And that’s when I understood what Jim Knudsen had been telling me.

The thing I didn’t understand about writing and reading was readers already know how they’d feel in my character’s place. But they’re reading my stories to know how my characters felt about the scene/events (and then they’ll sympathize with the characters or they won’t). So what was missing from my writing, and what was holding it back from making an impact on readers was the emotional significance of whatever events I was writing about. I needed to stop thinking so much when I wrote and let some of the emotion and feeling leak out onto the page.

I’ve learned several lessons throughout my writing education. I usually learned a few things during every workshop and ideally, every story. But being able to reveal the emotional significance was the most important thing I ever learned. Now, I make sure the emotional significance is in every story/novel I write, in every scene, and when I’m really cranking, in every action.

Knowing the emotional significance was missing was a huge lesson, but I still had to figure out how to get it into my stories without simply telling my readers what it was. And that is still done with “showing” — using revealing actions and dialog to reveal your character’s inner emotional state. (Again, a fine balancing act between too much and too little.)

For example, a friend wrote about how her father told her that he wouldn’t pay to send her out of state for college and that her chosen career, being a journalist, was nothing but a bunch of government lackeys. Which was a great scene and very intense, but she ended the scene with her father’s crushing dialogue and never gave me her reaction or retort. I had no idea how she felt about it. She needed to give me her reaction/response, to show me how she felt with dialogue and physical action, so I understood what the scene, and ultimately the piece, meant, why this scene was important and significant to her.

Did she say anything back to him? Think anything? Wish she’d said something?  How did this impact her? Hurt her? Motivate her? Did she sit meekly and quietly at the table and finish her meal silently while reconsidering her career choice? Or did she scream “Fuck You, Father dear” in the fancy restaurant and then storm out to walk all the way home, alone, in the rain? These different reactions would have revealed (shown) two totally different emotional states and characters (and both completely different from how I would have felt in that situation).

It’s not simply a matter of putting the emotional significance at the end of a scene, although that is better than nothing. The emotional significance should run throughout every scene. Let your character’s emotional state seep into in every bit of dialogue and action and description.

Get emotional. Otherwise, what’s the point?

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  1. #1 by liveyourlife on July 23, 2013 - 7:20 pm

    This is great advice! Thank you.

  2. #2 by wordimprovisor177 on July 24, 2013 - 10:38 pm

    Excellent post, Matt. Much of what I learned studying and performing improv theater can be applied to writing. Of course, in improv, we have no idea what what’s going to happen on stage or who our characters are. Everything happens in the moment. I like to write that way, too. Okay, I’m going off on another one of my crazy improv tangents! Anyway, in one workshop, our instructor told us to enter every scene with an emotion. It didn’t matter if the emotion was appropriate to the scene or not. Sometimes, the inappropriate emotion leads to a more interesting scene and complex character. Thanks for joining us this month! Great advice.

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